something beyond grace

shines behind your face

while an ethereal reassurance

lingers just below the surface


blindingly guiding me

focused directionless

destination distinguished

by the harmony between us


a vibrational affirmation

of the subliminally divine

that’s rationally translated

as tangentially sublime


and this veracity created

as the reverie unwinds

flaunts a  genuine relevance

unrelated to time


an ineffable magnificence

the quintessential certainty

at the core of our existence

true love in all its purity


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6 responses to “Interconnectedness

  1. I must say I like this a lot. the rhythm flows as smooth as a slow stream over rocks. And the assonance is subtle and the alliteration delicately done. All in all it is a masterful piece of work that does your theme justice; for the peotic devices are employed just below the surface much as the love of which you speak.

  2. Thank you so much Mr Porter. Always appreciate your professional insight and poetic prowess. Your comments always motivate one way or the other 🙂 Sorry I haven’t been around much. I’m trying to get my feet wet again.

  3. Heartfelt writing makes for great reading Mr Dean.

  4. Lovely..and captivating..Thank you for sharing 🙂

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