Another Run Around the Block

drawn and quartered

a half fragmented

sunned and watered

while remaining unplanted

on even keel

still slightly slanted

unqualified to feel

yet entirely enchanted

perpetual motion

within the stagnated

suffering suffocation

while being aerated

total commotion

of the extremely elated

in a silent narration

of the overly understated


One response to “Another Run Around the Block

  1. Great imagery, elegant use of rhyme. Your use of both assonance and alliteration create a smooth rhytmic flow to this concise summation of frustration with the mindless madness of mediocrity

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