The Key (tanka 2)


What truly transpires

When eyes lock for the first time

Is dependent on

What has happened in the past

And what each has done with it

 

 

photo: deaddamien.deviantart.com

 

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7 responses to “The Key (tanka 2)

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  2. Very true =) You captured that moment into words very nicely.

  3. Very symbolic, perfect.

  4. I am in awe of this piece…has a real feeling of wisdom to it and although short is full of emotion

  5. Truly does make one see a Key in a new way entirely.
    The emotion captured so well within a Tanka, well done.

  6. You hold the key….to my heart, mind and soul. I thank God for our past and look forward to many more tomorrows. Unlocking all the potential within. I love you ❤

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