The Key (tanka 2)

What truly transpires

When eyes lock for the first time

Is dependent on

What has happened in the past

And what each has done with it






7 responses to “The Key (tanka 2)

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  2. Very true =) You captured that moment into words very nicely.

  3. Very symbolic, perfect.

  4. I am in awe of this piece…has a real feeling of wisdom to it and although short is full of emotion

  5. Truly does make one see a Key in a new way entirely.
    The emotion captured so well within a Tanka, well done.

  6. You hold the key….to my heart, mind and soul. I thank God for our past and look forward to many more tomorrows. Unlocking all the potential within. I love you ❤

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